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Moonflowers death by NonsensicalLogic Moonflowers death by NonsensicalLogic
I'm really proud with how this turned out, Bluepaws heads shape is a bit odd though, and Moonflowers body is, errm, a bit 'akward'
so other than that, yeah! ^^


EDIT: I fixed up one of Moonflowers ears a bit to make her pose a bit more fitting. ^^;

Artİme/Hollyleaf1998
Character(s)İErin Hunter
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:iconnightthekittykat:
You did a very good job on this peice. Let's start with the pros, hm?

:bulletred: Bluepaw's expression is great, you can really see the horror and despair on it.
:bulletred: The blood looks great, quite realistic. I am seriously LOVING how you did the blood coming from Moonflowers throat, it's amazing :heart:
:bulletred: The anatomy is looking good too, you've got the shape of a cat's head down well, and Bluepaw's leg looks great.
:bulletred: The background really looks good. I love how you did the stormy clouds and the bushes.
And the cons would probably be...
:bulletyellow: Moonflower doesn't look that dead, just ticked off. I can see what you were going for, but I'm afraid you didn't quite capture it. Next time try drawing the eyes wide open and glazed over looking, and maybe have the mouthe open a little.
:bulletyellow: Moonflower's anatomy looks sort of odd, and as you said in the description, a bit awkward looking. I'm not sure how you could fix this, maybe try to draw her front legs stretched out infront of her, instead of at her side?
:bulletyellow: Though the paws look great, Bluepaws left front leg, the one furthest from the veiwer is a bit chubby looking compared to the other one. It may just be me, I'm not sure.
:bulletyellow: There's a line beside Bluepaw's neck, I'm sure it's for her leg. If it is, then it's making it look as if her arm is coming from her head or her neck. It'd probably be better with out that line.

Well, that is my critique, first one too, so I'm not sure if I did well. XD Um...I guess I should just end it here, huh?
Well...uh..bye! :wave:
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:iconarkreon:
Arkreon Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice!
You could have made MoonFlower's eyes more glazed though.
Great job.
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:iconcreamycat5:
CreamyCat5 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:,(
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:iconsilverpelt808:
Silverpelt808 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014
Moonflower's expression is priceless.
Awesome work with this piece of art.
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:iconforbidden-void:
Forbidden-Void Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Moonflower just looks like
Oh god
Why
Leave me alone
Why must I have kits
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:iconimpyoq:
impyoq Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist
I'm assuming this person did not have permission to use your art? [link]
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:iconambercatproductions:
AmberCatProductions Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That's an amaing drawing!!
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:iconinokiba:
inokiba Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
onde eu posso ler ou comprar esses livros?
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:iconinokiba:
inokiba Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
em qual site eu posso ler online ou comprar esses livros
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:iconminnowwater:
Minnowwater Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Student General Artist
I love it! Bluepaw looks really cute but sad. Moonflower looks well......dead!
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:iconhawkclawwarrior:
HawkClawWarrior Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
listen to this song and watch this picture [link] kinda sad
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:iconwolvesaresocool22:
wolvesaresocool22 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2011
i feel so bad for bluepaw/fur/satr
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:iconhellfirebloodwolf:
HellFireBloodWolf Featured By Owner May 16, 2011
YAY it has blood, and blood, and death, and gore, AND BLOOD!
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:iconghostcub:
Ghostcub Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
:iconcryingplz:
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:iconstraberriepie:
straberriepie Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2011
MoonFlower looks like "stop complaining, man!" xD
But still I like your drawing! It's great ^^
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:iconkitkatkatee:
kitkatkatee Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2011
omg i cried at this part, and then her sister had to die!! stoopid
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:iconcryingclouds:
CryingClouds Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011
She got killed by a medicine cat!!!
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:iconnonsensicallogic:
NonsensicalLogic Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011  Student
ikr!!! so stupid!
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:iconcryingclouds:
CryingClouds Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011
Sorry??? O_o
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:iconrattoratrat:
Rattoratrat Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
How did she die?
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:iconnonsensicallogic:
NonsensicalLogic Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2010  Student
oh Windclans medicine cat slashed her throat when she was attempting to destroy their supply of herbs in the medicine cats den.
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:iconrattoratrat:
Rattoratrat Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And Moonflower is from Thunderclan? .....sorry,but I didn't read that book.
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:iconnonsensicallogic:
NonsensicalLogic Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2010  Student
Oh, well she's Bluestar and Snowfurs(Snowfur is Bluestars dead sis) mother.
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:iconrattoratrat:
Rattoratrat Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oook
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:iconkitkatkatee:
kitkatkatee Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2010
err... is this from bluestars quest? cuz i dont remember this part... ^^;
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:iconblura9:
Blura9 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2010
this is from Bluestar's Prophecy. It's the part where they go and attack WindClan for herbs. Moonflowers dies from getting attacked by the medicine cat.
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:iconmsraggamuffin:
MsRaggaMuffin Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2010  Student Digital Artist
mufasa?
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:iconshadowstar5598:
Shadowstar5598 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2010  Student
How is this awkward?
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:iconlisamini3:
LisaMini3 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I know this is uh, a sad moment but I can sometimes imagine this scene diffrently.
Bluepaw: Oh my god.. Moonflower is dead. WHO WILL PAY FOR MY MARBLES? Stormtail sure won't!
Snowpaw: ...What?
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:iconwarriorcatsfan102:
warriorcatsfan102 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2010
IT'S ALL GOOSEFEATHER'S FAULT!If it wern't for that stupid omen she would be alive and I hate Hawkheart so much I WILL KILL THEM BOTH!!
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:iconnonsensicallogic:
NonsensicalLogic Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2010  Student
lol
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:iconwarriorcatsfan102:
warriorcatsfan102 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2010
Really I want to kill them along with the other characters I hate:
Tigerstar,Hawkfrost,Thistleclaw,Breeze-pelt,Nightcloud,Brokenstar,Darkclaw,and Ashfur (TC).
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:iconwarriorcatsfan102:
warriorcatsfan102 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2010
Opps I ment Darkstripe.
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:iconahsystemdown:
AHSystemDown Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You might want to change Morningflowers face, she doesn't look dead. Just pissed. But that's my thoughts, good pic besides that
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:iconslam90:
SLAM90 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2010
awwwwww pure bluestar
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:icontoxiceevee:
ToxicEevee Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2010
I actually cried when i read this part XDD
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:icondark-forest-faerie:
Dark-Forest-Faerie Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2010
When things die, their pupils lay in a flat, dead stare directly in front of them. This cat just looks pissed off.
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:iconkenyale911:
kenyale911 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Actually, her eyes were said to lurch back in her head when she was flying like she was havin a stroke or soemthing
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:iconfazbearfever:
FazbearFever Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2010  Student Digital Artist
I love it :D

lol Moonflower looks annoyed
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:iconnonsensicallogic:
NonsensicalLogic Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2010  Student
lol wat? XD
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:iconfazbearfever:
FazbearFever Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2010  Student Digital Artist
turn her head 90 degrees counter clockwise and remove the blood...that = annoyed lol
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:iconnonsensicallogic:
NonsensicalLogic Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2010  Student
lol XDDD
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:iconfazbearfever:
FazbearFever Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2010  Student Digital Artist
ikr

Is it ok if I use Hawkshadow for a pic?
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:iconnonsensicallogic:
NonsensicalLogic Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2010  Student
sure, but gimme a link when your done plz
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:iconfazbearfever:
FazbearFever Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2010  Student Digital Artist
i will x3
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:iconwarriorstheclan:
warriorstheclan Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2010
i loves it
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:iconlugia101:
lugia101 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010
moonflower looks like shes annoyed or bored rather than dead but its still good
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:iconcloversplash:
Cloversplash Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Bluefur had such a sad and difficult life
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:iconnonsensicallogic:
NonsensicalLogic Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010  Student
I agree. poor Bluekit/paw/fur/star. XDDD lol
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:iconzeikotheshepherd:
ZeikoTheShepherd Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010
awsome! poor bluey :(
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:iconnonsensicallogic:
NonsensicalLogic Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010  Student
yeah... :l
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